Careful
Hug
Mistake
Plus from Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Sensational (of all things)
Mixing memes, I offer this vignette in senryu form.
she was so careful
with her affection always
sleeping alone
~ : ~
nobody to hug
nobody to break down
her wall of ice
~ : ~
was it her mistake
to be so resolute
or finally give in
~ : ~
being less careful
be it mistake or not
accepting a hug
~ : ~
she discovered
the sensations were indeed
sensational
~(!)~
well put
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see she melted.
ReplyDeleteThese words lend themselves to love poems.
ReplyDeleteWell, you would - wouldn't you?
ReplyDeletewhat a sensational tale you wove into those haiku!
ReplyDeletelive the ending!