~ 1 ~
when the willow
whispers to the cool spring wind
do the pine trees listen
~ 2 ~
long haired old woman
tresses drooping to the ground
why are you weeping
~ 3 ~
ask not
for whom the willow weeps
it weeps for thee
~ 4 ~
beneath a willow
an old man stops to listen
the leaves whisper
~ 5 ~
sad willow tree weeps
moose will eat it leaf and bark
goose prefers forbs
~ 6 ~
black widow spider
dowager of the willow
weeps not for her mate
~:~:~:~:~
Adore #1! Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful set of creative haiku with lots of humor ~ Happy Day ^_^
ReplyDeleteps. love to hear what moose and goose are up to in your haiku !
I was hoping she would be a black willow spider today... :)
ReplyDeleteNo Willow for Shade
I do love your old man! He listens to the same whisperings I listen to. ( and Ella too)
ReplyDeleteThe first one is perfect
ReplyDeleteHeartwarming... and funny! Then I listened to Ella. Divine! ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz